tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4744421389704762997.post984608037874908545..comments2024-03-11T15:00:14.642+05:30Comments on Karma and some: The sculptorUrmi Chanda Vazhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01012682924522858317noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4744421389704762997.post-81218545762306640222011-05-19T11:34:41.596+05:302011-05-19T11:34:41.596+05:30Ooofff. I hate suspense.
But you guys have shifted...Ooofff. I hate suspense.<br />But you guys have shifted scenes so fast that even I had to stick it out for the sheer joy of the "flicker".<br />And then I find the whole thing is an awesomely brilliant dream catch.<br />And then on top of it all is a little life lesson.<br />I continue to be delighted, impressed and proud.Virennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4744421389704762997.post-74020969058742223242011-05-19T07:05:52.693+05:302011-05-19T07:05:52.693+05:30I came here expecting an entirely different style ...I came here expecting an entirely different style of writing and hey, am I surprised or what! The shifting scenes work so well for a story like this, Urmi and Abhimanyu; and considering the fact that it is a collaboration - it's even more astonishing to see how well it has all come together.Reehttp://www.reenalmeida.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4744421389704762997.post-84563302413039536602011-05-18T23:17:28.635+05:302011-05-18T23:17:28.635+05:30How to write a best suspense? "Show" a s...How to write a best suspense? "Show" a story, create a scene, dont reveal anything at all and just when the reader thinks, "oh I know what is going to happen", throw him off the track. In other words, an unpredictable end is the best end. While the story fulfills all the requirement, I feel the scene deserves a plot. If you are so good narrating a scene, I wonder how good you would be with actually writing a full fledged story. Not to forget your fellowship with Abhimanyu, this is exactly how a narration should be. Please write a story next time. Would love to read it.Udayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10777495248120565673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4744421389704762997.post-76166824575524717342011-05-18T17:12:38.715+05:302011-05-18T17:12:38.715+05:30what a anticlimax...!
left me wanting for more.what a anticlimax...!<br />left me wanting for more.snehal.khandkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17367891930535661662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4744421389704762997.post-63461750411285626562011-05-18T12:02:00.871+05:302011-05-18T12:02:00.871+05:30So peculiar , atypical....
eerie? yes somewhat.. b...So peculiar , atypical....<br />eerie? yes somewhat.. but in a good way..<br /> <br />Urmi you continue to surprise me with:"Oh, you had this one too in you?"....<br /><br />BhanupratapAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4744421389704762997.post-66984477968450327902011-05-18T03:04:57.689+05:302011-05-18T03:04:57.689+05:30Imaginative as always, Urmi, and well crafted. The...Imaginative as always, Urmi, and well crafted. The shifts of perspective and setting worked well to heighten the disoriented suspense of it all.<br /><br />Well done.Samirhttp://samirbharadwaj.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4744421389704762997.post-87647965659228734112011-05-17T21:47:56.863+05:302011-05-17T21:47:56.863+05:30master story teller...I am always awestruck by you...master story teller...I am always awestruck by your stories...!! Keep it up... <br />hugs,<br />Juno.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4744421389704762997.post-57067179725734474732011-05-17T19:21:07.492+05:302011-05-17T19:21:07.492+05:30Great story. The narrative has just great twists t...Great story. The narrative has just great twists that you kept me glued :) I loved the ending.. The last line was sheer class.. Loving your collaborations.. Looking out for more<br />Pri :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00248099546371700121noreply@blogger.com